sondrajones@mycwi.cc
English 102 034W
Final Reflections
5 December 2011
The
end of a semester, a light through the darkness, an oasis in the desert, an end
to a war! Well, it is possible that I am over dramatizing this a bit, but the
knowledge that the end of a semester is near and that classes will be ending is
a wonderful feeling. After working so hard all year just to get a grade higher
than an “F” so that you will never have to take this class again, looking back
can be an unhappy idea for a student. “Move forward!” “Get out!” “Run for your
life and never look back!” are the thoughts that may be running through the
minds of many students, however, it is important that we collaborate all the
information, facts and knowledge we have gained and see what we have truly
learned.
Personally,
this class has been a trial and at times a reckless adversity. Balancing home,
work, school and a small social life, there are times when school did not seem
to be high on the priority list. There were many nights where I was up into the
wee hours of the morning just trying to perfect a paper, finish proper
documentation or ask the professor a question on the discussion board. In fact,
Ms. Jewkes after answering my question posted at 3:03 AM stated, “And Sondra...GET
SOME SLEEP - 3 am is a crazy hour to be working on your paper. :D.” (Jewkes)
Yet this was a common occurrence. Time management was something that I had to
work on. For the majority of the semester I was determined give myself Sunday’s
off from both work and school but that required me to be finished with all my
assignments by Saturday night. I made this a high priority because I needed a
day free from worry and activity. On the weeks I did not get this accomplished
I deeply regretted it. I was forced to learn to say no to things during the
week so that I was able to do as God did while creating the earth, “he
rested…from all His work”. (Life Application Study Bible, Gen. 2.2) This is a
skill I can carry on to both my work and future schooling. A day off is
important for my body to rest and recover and I need to set my priorities so
that I am able to give myself the rest and rejuvenation I need.
Choosing
a topic is a difficult and incredibly important which is something I was forced
to learn in a difficult manner. Once finding something interesting to write
about narrowing your topic can be difficult patricianly if not much is known
about your topic. In the final paper “A Midwifes Impact on the Millennial
Development Goals in India” it was discovered while amidst research that at
first not much information was available. However, once an interview was
conducted information was overflowing and had to be limited. Choosing a topic
is something I will continue to work on in my future writing.
One
large item that was discovered in the actual structure of the papers was ending
paragraphs with quotations. In the first paper written there were 3 instances
of paragraphs ending with quotations. In the final paper quotation placement
was thoughtfully considered and there were 0 paragraphs that ended in
quotations. Each quotation was thoughtfully examined.
Another
interesting aspect to this course was learning to write to your instructor’s
preferences. While my teacher was wonderful and graded very fairly she had, like
every instructor, certain preferences and criteria that had to be met. Things
such as ending paragraphs with quotations I had never heard that that was not
acceptable. I absolutely appreciated the fact that she prepared us for this by
incorporating an incredibly arrogant professors article about grading papers
into the syllabus. (Michael Berube, Analyze, Don’t Summarize)
All
of the information collected over the semester will help in my dream of
becoming a midwife. Through the papers I have learned about how midwifes can
emotionally support women and their families. I also discovered that midwifes
must know a great deal about women’s lives and previous emotional status coming
into pregnancy and how it relates as the pregnancy develops.
Fast writing is also an amazing technique I
have picked up and learned to love. Allowing information that is coming from my
head flow onto the paper and then putting together paragraphs makes writing
much more interesting and less time consuming.
I
would like to thank Ms. Leslie Jewkes for all that she has done in her attempt
to develop both our writing and our character as students. It takes a special
person to want to take English 102 over and over again. Not only attending
classes but telling people how to make themselves better for their entire
future is a wonderful passion and she does it so well. I have very much enjoyed
you as my teacher Ms. Jewkes.
Though
I learned much more I also know that attempting to put too much information
into a paper is foolish, and makes for your information to become dry and
boring to the reader so I will end with this thought. No mater how non
applicable a class may seem to your major, it will build inside yourself not
only perseverance but other qualities that will strengthen you not only as a
student but as a person. Regardless of how a person may feel about the class,
always work hard and do best that is possible, because you never know what
skills may be learned.
Sondra,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog very much: for the visual aspect, as well as for the very interesting information. After reading your local paper, I was thinking back to the birth of my son (in a hospital) and I wished I would have had a midwife helping me giving birth in my home. I could only agree with all the things you wrote in that paper.
Your interviews and other papers are very concise and packed with information. I have learned a lot.
One of the neat things on your blog that I like in particular is the slide show.
It is a great blog all around!